大學英語四級真題作文范文及點評
下面是大學英語四級真題作文“誠實利人利己，做人應該誠實”的范文以及點評，備考四級的同學們快看過來吧。
Directions: For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 120 words following the outline liven below:
1.當前社會上存在許多不誠實的現象
2.誠實利人利己，做人應該誠實
It Pays to Be Honest
Nowadays，we often hear people's complaints about dishonesty. In fact，there are dishonest practices in all walks of life. Take food safety as an example，the past five years has witnessed an average number of 4，320 factories producing contaminated food every year，which seriously harmed people's lives and health.
It pays to be honest because being honest is beneficial to both other people and yourself. To begin with，being honest will make others relieved and devote full efforts to their work and life. In return，it will bring you true friendship and good mood，which promotes your happiness. What’s more, being honest can always bring you more business opportunities. We have heard lots of successful businessmen note that “doing business is actually testing one's moral quality.”
Being honest has become our traditional virtue and we should bear in mind to behave ourselves honestly.(143詞)
“一句話”點評
第一段的'數據將吸引閱卷老師的眼球讓其首先關注，同時使用了witness, take... as an example.等好詞與短語及producing分詞做后置定語，將形成良好的第一印象。
快捷構思
第一段:描述現象，引入該段中，心“當前社會上存在許多不誠實的現象”。而后“一句話”數例，舉出工廠生產污染食品的例子更加形象地說明社會上的不誠實。
第二段:開門見山提出該段主題句“誠實利人利己，做人應該誠實’，。緊接著列出了make others relieved and devote full efforts to their work and life和bring you more business opportunities支持該主題中心。
第三段:事實上，原題并沒有第3個提綱，最后一段可以不寫。但為了使得文章顯得充實，在末段做一個簡單的總結或號召是一種值得推薦的寫法。
好詞好句
(1)all walks of life各行各業
(2) promotes one's happiness增加幸福感
(3) devote full efforts to奉獻全部精力
(4) traditional virtue傳統美德
(5) bear in mind記住(優于大家通常會寫的remember)
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