英語四級真題作文范文及點評
備考英語四級中很重要的一項便是閱讀學習真題，下面就來看看四級考試真題作文的范文和點評吧。
2007年12月真題
Directions: For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled What Electives to Choose. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1.各大學開設了各種各樣的選修課
2.學生因為各種原因選擇了不同的選修課
3.以你自己為例……
What Electives to Choose
Nowadays，colleges offer a great variety of electives for the students to choose from. Take Beijing Normal University as an example，the past 5 years has witnessed a sharp increase in the number of selective courses from 4 to 129，covering nearly every aspect of culture，science and technology.
When it comes to the choice of what specific electives to take，different students hold different opinions.Some choose practical courses to obtain necessary skills，so that they can have stronger competence in the future job hunting. While others select courses of their pure interest or(nurses that may look easier to pass the examination so as to get enough credits for the degree.
A s far as I am concerned, I Seize every chance to take courses that may enlarge my horizon for I want to be a man with sharp active and imaginative mind.(144詞)
“一句話”點評
很顯然，第一段的兩個數據很輕松地抓住了閱卷老師的`眼球。同時使用了witness, sharp等好詞和(covering分詞做伴隨狀語，增加了亮點。
快捷構思
第一段:描述現象，引人該段中心“各大學開設了各種各樣的選修課”。而后“一句話”數例為具體現象展示，舉出例子更加形象地說明大學開設的選修課越來越多。
第二段:以模板句提出該段中心“學生因為各種原因選擇了不同的選修課”，接著分層列出同學們因不同原因而選擇不同的課程:practical courses, courses of their pure interest和courses that may look easier to pass the examination
第三段:直接展現自己觀點，并提出簡要的一個原因，不做更深層次的展開。
美麗詞句
(1)a great variety of各種各樣的(明顯優于全國人民都習慣使用的all kinds of)
(2)of their pure interest完全合乎興趣的
(3)seize every chance to抓住每一個機會
(4)enlarge my horizon開拓視野(類似的表達還有broaden horizon
(5)sharp，active and imaginative mind具有銳利的、活躍的和富有想象力的頭腦(三個生動形象的詞語修飾mina，精彩的并列結構)
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